You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for two weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him to accompany you. In your letter,
- Explain where and when you want to go
- Give details of the travel, dates and cost involved
- Describe some of the things you want to do.
Dear Kinjal,
Hope you are doing good at your health. You must remember that we are planning for some abroad trip since very long. However, due to the busy schedule, we could not manage anything until now. My purpose of writing this letter is to pursue you for one of the exotic destination tours that I have come across.
Recently, I have purchased a membership of sterling holidays which offers numerous tours and travelling options at the concessional rates. Thus, I have planned to visit Newzealand during this Diwali vacation which is under 25% discount on the membership. The entire package will cost us Rs. 1,75,000/- per person for 14 days including flight,twin sharing accommodation , breakfast and sightseeing. The tour will be commenced from 29th October to 11th November 2016. I want you to accompany me anyhow on this tour. So, there is no scope for any excuse.You know I am very fascinated about Newzealand and its landscape. Eventually, I am excited to enjoy the beach sports, scuba diving, paragliding, shopping and much more.
I can't resist myself thinking about our first foreign trip at Newzealand in your company. Please send all requisites for further process of this trip as soon as possible. The list of requisites is enclosed herewith.
With lots of love.
Yours sincerely
Bhumika Suryavanshi
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 220 250
No. of Characters: 1063 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.832 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.596 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.579 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.201 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.211 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.246 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pose of writing this letter is to pursue you for one of the exotic destination to...
^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , twin
... per person for 14 days including flight,twin sharing accommodation , breakfast and s...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...luding flight,twin sharing accommodation , breakfast and sightseeing. The tour wil...
^^
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...r. So, there is no scope for any excuse.You know I am very fascinated about Newzeal...
^^^
Line 5, column 709, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... scuba diving, paragliding, shopping and much more. I cant resist myself thin...
^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...gliding, shopping and much more. I cant resist myself thinking about our first ...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'so', 'thus', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233870967742 0.220444632235 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0604838709677 0.0606518309736 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0564516129032 0.0506257000042 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0846774193548 0.118615021944 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120967741935 0.107062808482 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0524193548387 0.041066498444 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75480628989 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241935483871 0.0385302599488 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0725806451613 0.0714148451538 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161290322581 0.0191574576366 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00806451612903 0.00930345855455 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1332.0 1141.60824742 117% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.134020619 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08219178082 5.53046319177 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34703196347 0.284621296913 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278538812785 0.211203875043 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200913242009 0.133321485273 151% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13698630137 0.0843313296314 162% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75480628989 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72602739726 0.622163163488 117% => OK
Word variations: 93.3776749228 62.8969750728 148% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.8823529412 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8345964897 44.7399317507 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3529411765 90.9928171075 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8823529412 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.613754768223 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.09278350515 287% => OK
Readability: 40.7362342197 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.34666666667 1.13073093955 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36466641163 0.331212695627 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.072489103522 0.0927372745006 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0585173961733 0.0736520305886 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.40391736622 0.579516596996 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101013798553 0.180689518051 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101616876848 0.122183219658 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809849621054 0.0765303033291 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.159994378757 0.211926503985 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0483877478132 0.0737400523855 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221668242353 0.203819188451 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972906357967 0.067151250289 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.0206185567 199% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.56701030928 195% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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