You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.-Thank you friend for the holiday-Explain that you left your wallet in their house-Give them

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.

-Thank you friend for the holiday
-Explain that you left your wallet in their house
-Give them instruction of how to send it back to you

Dear Brown Dive,

Hope, you are doing good. First of all, I thank you for an astonishing events during our holiday trip. It was a splendid moments that I never forget in my life.

Unfortunately, when I arrived my home and I come to realize that I forgot my purse in your home. I have my national identity card, ATM cards, driving license, etc. in my purse. It is very essential for me in day to day life.

So please try your best and comfortable time to send my purse as soon as possible through courier. Especially local courier service will not take responsibility for these important cards. So I kindly request you to send through DHL or aramex courier. It is professional and hope to receive the wallet soon. Please send the billing reference number of courier as text message to my mobile. So that most probably, I collect it from the office itself.

I am expecting my purse within next week. Advance thanks for helping me in this regard.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'event'?
Suggestion: event
... of all, I thank you for an astonishing events during our holiday trip. It was a splen...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'moment'?
Suggestion: moment
...ing our holiday trip. It was a splendid moments that I never forget in my life. Unfo...
^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226804123711 0.220444632235 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.128865979381 0.167888034529 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0876288659794 0.0606518309736 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0618556701031 0.0506257000042 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.154639175258 0.118615021944 130% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10824742268 0.107062808482 101% => OK
Participles: 0.020618556701 0.041066498444 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56009472825 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309278350515 0.0385302599488 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0412371134021 0.0714148451538 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00515463917526 0.0191574576366 27% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00515463917526 0.00930345855455 55% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 952.0 1141.60824742 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.134020619 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56725146199 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315789473684 0.284621296913 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222222222222 0.211203875043 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.105263157895 0.133321485273 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0643274853801 0.0843313296314 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56009472825 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622163163488 108% => OK
Word variations: 69.1752611623 62.8969750728 110% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 11.4 16.4300151701 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3531255582 44.7399317507 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4666666667 90.9928171075 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4 16.4300151701 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.266666666667 0.613754768223 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 33.6222222222 37.5504026743 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.02985074627 1.13073093955 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211940532017 0.331212695627 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0585897109711 0.0927372745006 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0449646639288 0.0736520305886 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477606249223 0.579516596996 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1141259273 0.180689518051 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682605297785 0.122183219658 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467975602446 0.0765303033291 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.124490279147 0.211926503985 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0552965965304 0.0737400523855 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126860838133 0.203819188451 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561220367065 0.067151250289 84% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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