You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card? ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir/Madam,

I like to request your bank to cancel my current credit card and replace it with the new one because I have lost my credit card during my travelling.

Yesterday I went to Sydney by train to attend the meeting with one of my office client. I usually carry my credit card with me if I run out of cash or for any other emergency situation. It is confirmed that I had my credit card with me when I reached Sydney because I used my credit card to pay my fare. Meeting was over quite before the scheduled time and there was plenty of time left for the sightseeing. Therefore, I visited few places as I had never been to Sydney before. During my tour, I accidentally dropped my card at some counter or it fell out of my purse as soon I reached my wallet to pay for my lunch at the cafe I could not find my credit card. I tried to look around but did not find it.

I am afraid that my stolen card is may be used by some unauthorized person. Therefore, you are requested to cancel my present credit card at once and issue me with a new one at the earliest possible time as I need to use it every now and then to pay my bills and make other necessary payments.

Your early kind attention in this regard is really appreciated.

Regards,
Noor Ali

Votes
Average: 7.1 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w one because I have lost my credit card during my travelling. Yesterday I wen...
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Line 5, column 706, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ied to look around but did not find it. I am afraid that my stolen card is may b...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...liest possible time as I need to use it every now and then to pay my bills and make other necessar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, then, therefore, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20081967213 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38507336991 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545081967213 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6014330404 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194517675212 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698304505964 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784239147964 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147458073409 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860920833944 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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