You have a new job and can no longer attend your regular English class.
Write a letter to the English school. In your letter:
- describe the situation
- explain the problem
- say what you would like to happen now that you cannot attend the lesson.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be no longer able to attend the regular English Class because I have moved to another state where I got a new job and It is about 250 miles away from the home.
I went for a short holiday trip with my friends to NewYork where one of them hooked me up with a new opening in their company. I found the opportunity quite valuable in terms of my career growth while giving a chance to travel to Head Office 6 times in a year and all expenses borne by company.
The main impediment factor is the distance. My new job is about 250 miles away from my daily coaching institute. It is not a feasible situation to travel back and forth from my home to my coaching classes. If I decided to come then my whole day would be ended up in travelling leaving no time for sleeping.
I figured out my institute has got branches in this city as well. Therefore, I am going to enroll myself in the branch which is in my city because it would be very convenient for me. It will also allow me to get back on the daily classes with put much gap in my study.
Yours faithfully
FaizalReza
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...up with a new opening in their company. I found the opportunity quite valuable in...
^
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y study. Yours faithfully FaizalReza
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21818181818 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33445270277 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7724066381 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134029855027 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471908644265 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074455545606 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905826677279 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112253392951 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.