You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter1. Describe the problem2. Say how long it has been a problem3. Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with a neighbour.

Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter

1. Describe the problem
2. Say how long it has been a problem
3. Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear Mr. Tharaka,

I am writing to you, with utmost disappointment to notice that, you have ignored several verbal communication had with you on disposing of garbage. You do not manage it properly, as we cannot bear the smell. Not only me, my children and elderly mother often struggle with health issue, due to the improper manner.

Moreover, I have been facing this issue since last month after you all moved newly into this house. I was tolerating it during initial weeks, but did not see any improvements. Further, I was being reminding on this politely for the past several weeks and annoyed to notice that, no any precautions have been made.

As a last reminder, I urge you follow the proper steps in disposing your home waste. Adding to that, please store all your waste in a bin and close it until the collectors collect them. Furthermore, store them in an isolated area in your home, if the wastes are not collected by them on a particular day.

Thanking you

yours faithfully,
R. Aravindhan

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...veral weeks and annoyed to notice that, no any precautions have been made. As a...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81714285714 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6200732191 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697142857143 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8351782471 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199475334905 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080196619331 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062501913055 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11045044058 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355009083317 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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