You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell:
– What it was about?
– Explain why it was helpful to you.
– Suggest other co-workers who should attend the course.
Dear sir,
this epistle is written to you in the context of the recent professional course which i have completed successfully. I was privileged and honored that our organisation has provided us to upscale the skills we inherent. The course included all the team leading skills and time management to complete are given targets which has helped me a lot to focus on my flaws while i work.
course has not only aided the concept of managing but also has involved my attention towards the larger areas of usage of social media. As with the inclining rate of change in the workplace be it in competitive way or in terms of knowledge. As now the vision has become more clear and target urinated.
As this subjective thing has helped me a lot because we had professional people on board to guide us through the thing i would like to recommend it to every body. So as to give a great impact to you for your personal growth and for companies growth as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, this epistle is written to you in the co...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ped me a lot to focus on my flaws while i work. course has not only aided th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Course
...to focus on my flaws while i work. course has not only aided the concept of manag...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e more clear and target urinated. As this subjective thing has helped me a l...
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Line 11, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... on board to guide us through the thing i would like to recommend it to every bod...
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Line 11, column 164, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...uld like to recommend it to every body. So as to give a great impact to you for your per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56647398844 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60854442032 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.3474786498 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139895208297 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510683428311 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533104567487 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824135672233 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491284287039 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.