You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say
– Give your flight details.
– Why were you disappointed?
– Suggest some improvements to the airport services.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I have recently traveled to Europe for my business trip. I am extremely satisfied with the services in flight but the services at airport were annoying. I am writing this to express my disappointment with the poor services at the airport which received.
I had traveled to Europe last week on 30th May in the evening and I broad Air India flight with flight number 76432. The staff on the flight was very friendly and helpful.
However, the staff at the airport was quite ill-mannered. When I came to the airport I was greeted with bitter words from the ticket checker. Later on, the customs department took a huge time to check the luggage that was around one and a half hours. Apart from this, escalators were not working hence, I had to carry my luggage by own.
I would like to request you that please teach your staff about the importance of good communication and also make the custom department a little fast. Furthermore, investigate the problem with the escalator and fix it as soon as possible.
I assume that you will quickly take action in order to satisfy other travelers. I look forward to a reply from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rvices at the airport which received. I had traveled to Europe last week on 30t...
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Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... at the airport was quite ill-mannered. When I came to the airport I was greeted wit...
^^^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customs'' or 'custom's'?
Suggestion: customs'; custom's
... from the ticket checker. Later on, the customs department took a huge time to check th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, look, may, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63981042654 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57759785296 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611374407583 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3596647212 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9285714286 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305363440247 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894754893909 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752924778797 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139356963425 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789560959253 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.