You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in.
Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter,
o introduce yourself
o explain how you learned about the internship
o explain why you would be suitable for the internship
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am currently residing at sector 22 b, Chandigarh. I am writing this to apply for an internship you recently opened.
Actually, I came across the advertisement given in the newspaper by your company about an internship for the web designer. I use to read a newspaper every morning, even today was doing the same and something caught my eyes on that was your advert.
Well, I have a master's degree in Computer Applications from Punjabi University, Chandigarh in first class. I have worked on different projects such a Pizza Delivery Software in Dot Net, Online Transportation Booking in Java, and later on, had done my major project on Travel and Tourism in PHP.
After successful completion of my study, I joined an IT company in Chandigarh and worked and web designer for 2 years and promoted to senior web designer. Recently, I am working as a tutor of PHP in Rayat Bhara College, Mohali as a guest lecturer. In my prospect, as per my previous study and experience I am suitable for this internship.
I am appending my Curriculum Vitae with this application. I passionately look forward to work with your company.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...t an internship for the web designer. I use to read a newspaper every morning, even...
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Line 8, column 51, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...essful completion of my study, I joined an IT company in Chandigarh and worked and we...
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Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... completion of my study, I joined an IT company in Chandigarh and worked and web design...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96750502092 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9731610063 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174457118309 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670690272503 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936536549172 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936292641339 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741917776415 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.