You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter
Tell them where you saw the advertisement
Explain why you would like to go
Describe the skills that you have that you think would help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of volunteer to teach English abroad that advertised on Thanh Nien Newspaper of September 15th 2019.
I am a teacher with more than 5 years of experience. I graduated in pedagogy from Van Lang university in 2014. I am teaching at Nguyen Cong Tru High School.My skills include good communication skill, knowing three languages as English, Chinese, Japanese.
Personally, I am interested with this job because l always would like discovering a new regions and could help their citizens to speak English, especially in developing countries.
If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. I look forward to discussing my credentials with you.
Thanks for your time and consideration
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r with more than 5 years of experience. I graduated in pedagogy from Van Lang uni...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...agogy from Van Lang university in 2014. I am teaching at Nguyen Cong Tru High Sch...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...teaching at Nguyen Cong Tru High School.My skills include good communication skill...
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Line 13, column 53, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'like'.
Suggestion: would always like
...I am interested with this job because l always would like discovering a new regions and could hel...
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Line 21, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanks for your time and consideration Your faithfully, Calla Balls
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... consideration Your faithfully, Calla Balls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43181818182 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04423878945 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.80303030303 0.622605031667 129% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6441157798 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221638600096 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804905776147 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652280188059 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103026848626 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687328526807 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.