Dear sir,
I have encountered a series of problems since I lived with another student in the same room. I am writing this letter to ask if you would be generous as to reassign to me a different room.
My roommate and I study the same course in the college. However, we have had a dispute recently since our lifestyles are completely different. I am more likely to study in a silent environment. Unfortunately, my roommate usually invites strangers to participate in parties in the room, which consequently generates numerous unbearable noises that interfere with my sleep and study. In addition, I am dreadfully affected by the din of the traffic, as my room is close to a busy road. As a consequence, I find it extremely difficult to concentrate on my work.
In the light of such facts, I would like you to arrange another place for me to settle in alone, as I am unwilling to share the room with others. Furthermore, the accommodation should also be far from busy roads.
I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. If you require further information, you can contact me by email.
Yours sincerely,
David.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 198 250
No. of Characters: 896 1200
No. of Different Words: 124 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.751 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.525 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.905 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.945 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.655 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormation, you can contact me by email. Yours sincerely, David.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01591280171 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0038243273 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304649812153 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868212978161 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733326000569 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187581589791 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715981353091 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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