You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
• describe what type of presentation you have in mind
• what topics it would cover and how long it would take
• who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you in order to grant me consent to conduct an informative speech about a healthy lifestyle. The primary cause to undertake this presentation is that I have attended a convention about the risks of unhealthy life which was beneficial because I acquire extensive knowledge about this subject so that I will be rejoiced to impart this information.
In fact, the speech will cover a number of ways to transform our sedentary lifestyle to an active and healthy one, by eating wholesome food and exercising on a daily basis. This demonstration will take from 30 to 45 minutes.
Hence, I would like to draw your attention regarding the attendees who partake in this presentation. It aims those who have not only determination be also persistence to improve the quality of their lives. I think that the auditorium would be expedient to carry out the informative speech. Eventually, thank you for the time I really appreciate it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
David Peter
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, really, regarding, so, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00568181818 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93101975562 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0106809539 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192825369265 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718424268919 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536506530682 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100363131154 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059073354589 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.