You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding some important papers and documents of mine which have been left at your hotel. I was one of the participants in the meeting was hosted at your hotel by IBM three days ago.

My room number was G507. I remember that I put my papers in the drawer in my room before going to see a customer. Those documents were our company’s contract with IBM. I did not bring the contract into another formal meeting because it is easy to mix them. After the final meeting, I got drunk during the celebration, so I forgot to take them back to my suitcase before leaving the hotel for the International Airport at night.

Those papers are extremely significant to our company. There is much detailed information about our project with IBM in the contract and our team is waiting for the scheme to implement program.

We would really appreciate it if you could deliver them to us. Our company address is No 1, Seaside Street, Tehran, Iran. We will pay the delivery fee.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Tommy Comperor

Votes
Average: 7.1 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Tommy Comperor
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71212121212 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63830282023 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5905699673 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6428571429 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217117121853 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620478450644 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903499992011 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12691504829 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105707441039 0.0580467560999 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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