You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the mana

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this letter to you in order to assist me to find some important documents that I forgot at your esteemed hotel. I believe that I left them on the desk in the auditorium room. This happens while we were preparing to leave the hotel, I collected everything except those important papers because of my rush to catch the company bus.

I cannot express how much importance those documents are. As they consist of a few contracts and some notes. The contents are highly confidential data since they have not only prices list but also names and addresses of our clients. If they fell into the wrong hands, I would be fired.

Therefore, I would be very grateful if you could find them and send them to me as soon as possible before my manager knows that I left them in the auditorium room. My number is 0120 965 36 78, so please do not hesitate to contact me, if you find any problem. Your prompt action will be highly appreciated.

Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Paula

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43749848529 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.151692635 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252937437291 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795361713753 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830936668975 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168409454147 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080931050351 0.0580467560999 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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