you recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken
Write a letter to the shop manager. in your letter.
Describe the problem with the equipment
explain what happened when you phoned the shop
say what you would like the manager to to
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you this letter to let you know that the blender i bought from your shop last Wednesday, which was on the 25th of July is not working.
Firstly, the blender have a faulty power cord, as a result of this the blender refused to turn on when it is plugged into the electric socket. Secondly, the handle and jar were broken. Hence, there is no way i can definitely use it because it is unusable due to the fact that there is no way blend with a cracked jar. Finally, the main switch is button has worn out, making it stiff and unresponsive to touch.
Let me explain my situation in more details about what happened when i called the shop. The secretary answered the phone and asked me about the make of the blender and its current situation, after i gladly provided her with all the necessary information. She then told me that although the blender have a warranty, it can take up to three month before they can actually replace it for me. She also advice me to send the blender back to the shop, so that they can send it back to the manufacturer but in the mean time i will have to make do without a blender in my kitchen for up to three months. I can categorically tell you how disappointed i was after the conversation.
Would you kindly send me another blender or still can i have a refund if it is impossible to have another one from you before next week. As i almost certainly do use the blender everyday.
Thanks for your considerations.
Yours Faithfully
Romeo Winchester
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...letter to let you know that the blender i bought from your shop last Wednesday, w...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...jar were broken. Hence, there is no way i can definitely use it because it is unu...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n more details about what happened when i called the shop. The secretary answered...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ave a warranty, it can take up to three month before they can actually replace it for...
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Line 7, column 518, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o the manufacturer but in the mean time i will have to make do without a blender ...
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Line 7, column 643, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...categorically tell you how disappointed i was after the conversation. Would yo...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... another one from you before next week. As i almost certainly do use the blender e...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s i almost certainly do use the blender everyday. Thanks for your considerations. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42907801418 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53229480432 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8479056118 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219087601964 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723442294113 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07069254488 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134846239956 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846517675934 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.