you recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. you phoned the shop but no action was taken.Write a letter to the shop manager.In your letter1. Describe the problem with the equipment2. Explain what happened when you phoned

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know regarding the problem I facing with Philip Fruite Juice blender I bought 2 days back. The glass cup blade is not functioning properly.
I have heard a lot about Philips about the best products they offer. So, with that mindset, I planned to purchase the Fruite Juice blender.
After reaching home, I opened the packing and filled the mixer with oranges to extract the juice, its blade inside the glass cup suddenly stopped moving. I quikcly called your shop to speak to your complaint department. After explaining our problem, I was promised that service technical person would our house within 48 hours. I want to highlight that nobody has neither visited our home nor we received phone call. I am extremely disappointed both with the quality and service from a popular Company.
I would like you to get this equipment repaired within 24 hours. If problem still cannot be fixed, then provide us the new blender as soon as possible.
I hope to receive a positive reply from you
Yours Sincerely
Anita

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...r to let you know regarding the problem I facing with Philip Fruite Juice blender...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty and service from a popular Company. I would like you to get this equipment re...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, still, then, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8087431694 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40989182494 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0596628945 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200028596432 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622229615201 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574107256357 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090415012777 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392052274798 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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