You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I stayed at your hotel last week. I am writing this as I forget to pick my clothes when I was leaving.
I had a business trip last week and hence, I booked your hotel for 3 days. I visited the hotel on 25th July and left on the 29th morning. I stayed in 105 room number which was on the first floor was in the right corner.
I clothes which I forget at your hotel are my blue jacket and one high neck knitted pull which was gifted by my paternal grandmother on my birthday hanging in the cupboard and I brought my personal green towel which I left in the bathroom.
I would like to request you please send me my clothes by courier service and I will be very thankful to you for this. Do not worry I will pay for the courier.
I hope to get a positive and immediate response from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hence, I booked your hotel for 3 days. I visited the hotel on 25th July and left...
^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...25th July and left on the 29th morning. I stayed in 105 room number which was on ...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...irst floor was in the right corner. I clothes which I forget at your hotel ar...
^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'clothe'
Suggestion: clothe
...st floor was in the right corner. I clothes which I forget at your hotel are my blu...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... towel which I left in the bathroom. I would like to request you please send m...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13095238095 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19564607303 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0771407833 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26369792187 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984776388476 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05571871562 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132227580275 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613385722809 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.