You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
• explain why you were at the restaurant
• describe the problems
• write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you in order to express my dissatisfaction regarding the supper I had with my family yesterday. In fact, I invited my wife to commemorate our wedding anniversary, so that we dine at your renowned restaurant located in the immediate vicinity because we heard from a friend that you render excellent services.
However, while we were eating, my wife found hair strands in the meal, and the food was too salty; thus, we aired our grievance to the waiter who rendered the food, but not only did he behave in an improper attitude, but he also acted in hateful demeanour. To preserve our dignity, we ordered the check and left instantaneously.
Hence, I trust that you can empathize with my situation. Therefore, I am expecting you to take immediate action by receiving a full fund for our meal. Eventually, thank you for your attention to this matter
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter David
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8502994012 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85463616136 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688622754491 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6562964043 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 4.34317383033 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217612882668 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922658911336 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593635535699 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130143811554 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063860937263 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.