you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterExplain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six monthsSay how your wo
Dear Jack,
I am writing to you about my decision about how I want to work in London which is the company’s head office in for six months.
As you know, I am working in Istanbul office for five years, I have some problems with my family and I hope to leave my country, should I transfer to head office I have enough time to take a professional training course in London university and it can have a positive effect on my efficiency.
So I request you to kindly permit me to leave the country. If it possible for you tell me to know about how can I request to transfer to head office or tell me about temporary occupation vacancy at the head office.
I should inform you, I can handle my work in Istanbul with my laptop and Katy accept to helps my work for six months.
Thank you for your time and support, I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35928143713 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47652393168 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8525995695 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355672557492 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168897679961 0.0766984524023 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693989625055 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203940631764 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648200440309 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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