Dear John,
This is in reference with the seminar being conducted in your country.I am very keen to participate in it and so would like to know further details about it.
Firstly,I would like to enquire about the topics being covered and who would be presiding it.Also if you are organising some guest lectures which would be beneficial for my work.
Sebsequently,also would like to know the duration of the program.The number of days it will take and the number of hours each day.
Furthermore,would you kindly tell me the cost of the entire program?Does it include accomodation?If not,any nearby reasonable hotel as I do not have any relative/friends in your country.
I would be very obliged if I could get the details as early as possible as it will assist me in making my arrangements accordinly.
Yours faithfully,
xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21586469154 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6540307129 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23040416667 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954815232302 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596519434015 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971852799226 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621121629704 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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