You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Trung Nguyen who is working in TechM company as a team leader of the workforce management department. I have seen the advertisement for a seminar related to cloud computing which is the topic that I am very interested in. Therefore, I am writing to inquiry several information about this event before registering for this seminar.
Firstly, could you please provide information about the dates and the length of this event? Secondly, I would like to know about activities that will be held during the event happening, so please send me a soft copy of the agenda of this event if the agenda is available. Finally, it would be great if you can give me a recommendation about good hotels as well as the cost itself, so I can have better preparation for this trip.
In order to arrange my work, I would like to receive the requested information by next Tuesday. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you,
Trung Nguyen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
... in. Therefore, I am writing to inquiry several information about this event before registering for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you soon. Thank you, Trung Nguyen.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73372781065 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75466507684 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7944953293 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210493917946 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842941374625 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431988894481 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137391429364 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259220620616 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.