Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Dear Robin,
It is very glad to connect you after a long break. I am very happy to know that you are going to get driving license from the state transport office. As now a days the driving license is become very essential and not treated as a prestigious logo.
The driving license is requiring for drive a vehicle. Other than this there are numerous advantages to opt driving license. As this is your identity and address proof. Also you are learning to become more organize and discipline citizen. 87
I would recommend you master john’s driving school. He is having rich experience in this gig. He is also well known in our city for 100 % assurance for getting a license and gain experience and learn great skills and tips for driving a vehicle. He teaches about the driving skills as well as how to keep vehicle in excellent conditions. He also make us proficient in doing service our vehicle on our own.
I would like to provide some important tips for this voyage of opting license. Learn and by heart the rules and regulations of driving, practice well and attend driving classes regularly without any hindrances.
Comments
Thanks for evaluation. I
Thanks for evaluation. I would definitely improve on the suggestions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...nse from the state transport office. As now a days the driving license is become very esse...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...from the state transport office. As now a days the driving license is become very esse...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...his is your identity and address proof. Also you are learning to become more organiz...
^^^^
Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... skills and tips for driving a vehicle. He teaches about the driving skills as wel...
^^
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o keep vehicle in excellent conditions. He also make us proficient in doing servic...
^^
Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ehicle in excellent conditions. He also make us proficient in doing service our vehi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s regularly without any hindrances.
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247706422018 0.220444632235 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.169724770642 0.167888034529 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733944954128 0.0606518309736 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596330275229 0.0506257000042 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0779816513761 0.118615021944 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105504587156 0.107062808482 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0642201834862 0.041066498444 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52862401198 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321100917431 0.0385302599488 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779816513761 0.0714148451538 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00917431192661 0.0191574576366 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045871559633 0.00930345855455 49% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1135.0 1141.60824742 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.134020619 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73232323232 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.284621296913 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.211203875043 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146464646465 0.133321485273 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.0843313296314 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52862401198 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.622163163488 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.6345178515 62.8969750728 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1428571429 16.4300151701 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7107462632 44.7399317507 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0714285714 90.9928171075 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.4300151701 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.613754768223 47% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.09278350515 334% => OK
Readability: 41.4155844156 37.5504026743 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.35820895522 1.13073093955 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236358345004 0.331212695627 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0984802696104 0.0927372745006 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0613567685597 0.0736520305886 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474045572469 0.579516596996 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161424423698 0.180689518051 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890715008491 0.122183219658 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493966526728 0.0765303033291 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272429527355 0.211926503985 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449401242409 0.0737400523855 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154467600565 0.203819188451 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438535433777 0.067151250289 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.