Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed
Dear sir,
I am an active member of our sports and leisure center, which is organized by our local community. I would like to write this letter for a humble request about to continue this sports and leisure center because I heard this Centre is considering to close.
As you know ,each member of this society would like to continue this sports and leisure Centre. Because everyone is using this Centre for physical exercise, some indoor games, and sometimes for conference . Moreover, there is no other place more convenient than this Centre.
If you close this place, all our community will be suffered. They have to search some other places. It may lead to decrease of interpersonal relationship among the community members.
Hope you will consider my request.
Yours faithfully
sherin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re is considering to close. As you know ,each member of this society would like t...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...door games, and sometimes for conference . Moreover, there is no other place more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06106870229 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55008372358 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679389312977 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.074928023 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172703005823 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641589456914 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059944098647 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883020658885 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737804774388 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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