Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
- explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
- say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
- give details of when you would be available for this work
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you concerning the job posting on the internet for individuals to perform voluntary work at your hospital. Thus, I wish to undertake this unpaid work because it deems as of paramount importance to make a contribution, and also fulfil my conscientious duty towards our community.
I would like to draw your attention to my qualifications. I have a personal aptitude to work under pressure, as well as I have the experience to take good care of the elderly as I acquired extensive knowledge from working at a retirement home last year. I can commence work on Saturday and Sunday at 4:00 P.M.
Eventually, I have attached my resume; hence, I would be much obliged if you consider this letter to fulfil moral obligation towards our society. Once again, thank you for your magnanimous.
I am looking forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
David Peter
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...working at a retirement home last year. I can commence work on Saturday and Sunda...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...work on Saturday and Sunday at 4:00 P.M. Eventually, I have attached my resume; h...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...again, thank you for your magnanimous. I am looking forward to receiving your r...
^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse. Yours faithfully, David Peter
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9935483871 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00855526568 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664516129032 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3125833333 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333513130175 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133095140543 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556646778635 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168352605869 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667426214282 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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