Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in support of my application to join the hospital as a volunteer
worker. I would be most grateful if you would consider the following information
favourably when deciding on my eligibility for this role.
I am currently a final-year college student preparing to enter medical school in the
coming year, and I feel that working as a volunteer in this department will provide
me with some much needed hands-on experience of the day-to-day responsibilities I
might encounter while working in a medical context. As I already have taken some
initial administrative and clerical roles in the past, I would be able to work on the
reception desk, as well as assist the elderly, the disabled or young patients in transit
to and from the various wards. I am also willing to assist medical staff with the
preparation of medical equipment, and I am trained in sterilisation and general
hygiene practice through an internship I took over the summer at a neighbouring
hospital. I am also willing to undertake any other tasks that the management would
consider suitable for my level of expertise and experience.
I will be available to accept any position if offered from early March, as I have to
complete my final exams, but I am available for interview at all times throughout the
week. I have enclosed my contact details, including my e-mail address and
telephone number, in the resume attached to this letter.
I hope that you find my application suitable, and hope to be considered for the role.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iding on my eligibility for this role. I am currently a final-year college stude...
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... my level of expertise and experience. I will be available to accept any positio...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...view at all times throughout the week. I have enclosed my contact details, inclu...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in the resume attached to this letter. I hope that you find my application suita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98514650104 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4247409942 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 76.5299724578 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.29896907216 442% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160338752312 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675459126739 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344528699554 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419502455197 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389796801107 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.