Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
• Explain reasons for the noise
• Apologize
• Describe what action you will take
Dear Alex,
I got your letter you sent to me. After I read the letter I was very shocked to get to know that the noise came from my flat has been put you on trouble. I’m really sorry about that. I never meant to spoil your evening time by noise that came from my flat.
These days I am studying for an exam with my friends. All my friends are staying with me at my place during the night time. When we do our studies sometimes we discuss the problems that we have found during our study session. Unfortunately, that caused to make a lot noise from my place.
My exam is still not finished and it will be finished by next week. Therefore, I will do my studies with my friends for another one week of time. I will explain my friends about the current situation and try our best to keep our noise very low. I promise you that we will not make any loud noise to disturb your freedom again.
I’m really sorry for the trouble I put you in. I hope you will understand my situation and accept my apology.
Regards,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...x, I got your letter you sent to me. After I read the letter I was very shocked to...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h me at my place during the night time. When we do our studies sometimes we discuss ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30456852792 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14547337251 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.622605031667 93% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8649483965 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.5714285714 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242741701429 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910541508997 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867376940654 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16602764706 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110134669949 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.01 7.59969072165 79% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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