Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution
Dear Mrs. Gandhi,
Hope you are doing well,
I am writing to you to inform about an issue that has been bothering me for the past two months. I have been a responsible tenant at Amrapali apartments for more than 2 years. Ever since my new neighbors have moved in to the apartment next door in apartment number 2B, it has been a very trying experience for me as her neighbor.
She has a habit of listening to loud music late at night post 11 pm at night, I guess that’s when she returns home and usually has friends over too. Now, I have to be at work at 7: 30 in the morning which requires me to sleep in by at least 11 pm. Ever since she has moved in, it has become increasingly difficult for me to do that and that has been affecting my life. I have spoken to her before, about this issue and expressed my concern but it hasn’t been helpful at all. I don’t wish to confront her by myself any further as I feel it could be counterproductive.
I request you to officially intimate her about this as the building manager about the inconvenience she has been causing to the rest of us. I think a refresher course on the etiquettes as a neighbor and rules of the building from you should help her understand the gravity of the situation. It would be immensely helpful if you could address this situation right away.
Kindly let me know if you require any more information or assistance from me.
Thanks & Regards,
Siddharth Choudhary
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...eighbors have moved in to the apartment next door in apartment number 2B, it has...
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...or in apartment number 2B, it has been a very trying experience for me as her nei...
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...ning to loud music late at night post 11 pm at night, I guess that’s when she ret...
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...I guess that’s when she returns home and usually has friends over too. Now, I h...
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...d usually has friends over too. Now, I have to be at work at 7: 30 in the morni...
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...in by at least 11 pm. Ever since she has moved in, it has become increasingly di...
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...don’t wish to confront her by myself any further as I feel it could be counterpro...
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...feel it could be counterproductive. I request you to officially intimate her...
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...he has been causing to the rest of us. I think a refresher course on the etiqu...
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... us. I think a refresher course on the etiquettes as a neighbor and rules of t...
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...rse on the etiquettes as a neighbor and rules of the building from you should h...
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...d rules of the building from you should help her understand the gravity of the s...
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...he gravity of the situation. It would be immensely helpful if you could address t...
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...ess this situation right away. Kindly let me know if you require any more info...
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...om me. Thanks & Regards, Siddharth Choudhary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, at least, i feel, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4552238806 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62990068381 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4288119281 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192453276801 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598978394281 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568758263877 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097177879361 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043482135089 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.