Your next door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night Because of the loud music you often lose sleep Write a letter to the building manager In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

Dear Kevin,

I am writing this regarding the issue I have been facing for two months. I have been living in this building since 6 years as a responsible tenant. Recently, I got the new neighbor who loves music very much. on the contrary the problem is, she loves to listen loud music at night, which is quit unacceptable for me. She has a habit of listening music after 11pm and sometime parting with friends late night. In this busy life, I have to wake up very early at morning for my job and her loud music bothering me and my sleeping schedule.

i would like to request you to talk with her about the rules of building, since she is a new tenant, she may not aware of building rules and regulation. If possible, i would request you to post building's music rules at the entrance so everyone can see it.

Thanks and regards,

Asmita Acharya

Tenant-605

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...ch. on the contrary the problem is, she loves to listen loud music at night, wh...
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...he problem is, she loves to listen loud music at night, which is quit unaccepta...
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...es to listen loud music at night, which is quit unacceptable for me. She has a h...
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...ble for me. She has a habit of listening music after 11pm and sometime parting wi...
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...friends late night. In this busy life, I have to wake up very early at morning f...
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...ee it. Thanks and regards, Asmita Acharya Tenant-605
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50632911392 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39357683447 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6731072142 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213976458348 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832300847076 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619699163215 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160653221457 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251947965506 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, on the contrary

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