With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many countries are making space exploration where huge amount of capital is invested. Most people believe that the cost involved on such exploration is a complete waste; instead it could be utilized on other important causes. I agree that, the issues of contemporary societies should be given more priority. However, at the same time space exploration should also be continued.
It is undoubtedly true that, world is going through various challenges everyday such as pollution, poverty, crime, violence, war and natural disaster. In these circumstances, investment on space exploration s...
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Billions of dollars is invested on sophisticated technology
Billions of dollars are invested on sophisticated technology
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