Do you agree or disagree with the following statment? In the twenty years there will be fewer cars in the use than there are today. Use spesifik reason and example to support your answer.
I am disagree with the following statement in twenty years there will be fewer cars in the use than there are today. I have a few reason to support my statement.
First, at the time, many people whom go to work, go to school and go every where use the cars. We can see in Indonesia many cars o the road, specially in Jakarta, almost people use two cars. I think, public transportation can replace the cars because a few country, population grown up continue and government in many country already yet to face that. Many government can not prepare good public transportation, for the example, we can see in jakarta and others town in Indonesia, many cars on the road and traffic jam in every where.
Second, the cars grown up faster. Every years many car brands launch their product. One kinds product launch 100.000 cars one years. One car brands launch one product three times. That happen cause many people buy a cars do not usefulness but for fashionable. That is change for car brands to launch their product three times a years. Car brands development to continue their product to follow fashionable with technology, entertainment, and new mode to support their product. Many people buy car to follow the mode and fashionable. For the example, we can see famous football players like David beckham, C. Ronalda, Lionel messi, and many others buy the cars when new mode launching and they buy cars tree times a years. Their habit are followed by their fans.
Third, at the time, industry of cars grown up. Many country compete to create industry of cars. We can see in Indonesia, Government of Indonesia tries to make industry of car. The Government of Indonesia tries to development their product since senior high school. That is done by Government of Indonesia to compete with others country and increase their image. Industry of cars became one of many standard development one country. That make many country compete create new cars with highly technology. For example, Government of United States Of America rebuilt their factory of cars and India keep to try development their product. That happen because increase demand in the world.
Fourth, Cars as attribute of pride. Many people in the world want to buy a cars. They feel proud when use the cars. They keep try to buy the cars.
I am disagree with the following statement
I disagree with the following statement
have a few reason to support
have a few reasons to support
many people whom go to work
many people who go to work
Sentence: We can see in Indonesia many cars o the road, specially in Jakarta, almost people use two cars.
Description: The fragment , almost people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace almost with adjective
Sentence: I think, public transportation can replace the cars because a few country, population grown up continue and government in many country already yet to face that.
Description: An adverb, particle is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to up and continue
Sentence: Many government can not prepare good public transportation, for the example, we can see in jakarta and others town in Indonesia, many cars on the road and traffic jam in every where.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and town
Sentence: One kinds product launch 100.000 cars one years.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to kinds and product
Sentence: Car brands development to continue their product to follow fashionable with technology, entertainment, and new mode to support their product.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to brands and development
Sentence: and they buy cars tree times a years.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cars and tree
Sentence: Many country compete to create industry of cars.
Description: The fragment country compete to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace compete with verb, past tense
Sentence: The Government of Indonesia tries to development their product since senior high school.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to development and their
Sentence: That is done by Government of Indonesia to compete with others country and increase their image.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and country
Sentence: That make many country compete create new cars with highly technology.
Description: The fragment That make many is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Description: A qualifier, pre is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to highly and technology
Sentence: For example, Government of United States Of America rebuilt their factory of cars and India keep to try development their product.
Description: The fragment India keep to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace keep with verb, past tense
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to development and their
Sentence: That happen because increase demand in the world.
Description: The fragment That happen because is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace happen with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
want to buy a cars.
want to buy a car.
want to buy cars.
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