In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
In today’s times, children get more freedom and are being responsible for their lives. Some of the people are opinion that they are working as paid worker it’s totally wrong whereas others are believe that it’s very essential, valuable experience for their future career. This essay will discuss my point of the views by analyzing both sides of the arguments.
To begin with, there are several reasons for support to children can do paid work. First and foremost, students can learn many new things with work, get responsibly and monetary gain. It can also argue that some children belong to middle class family and their parents could not affordable to provide their all institutional expenses. For instance, if students would be work with study, they can financial support to their family. Also, they can develop their cognitive and intellectual skills.
On the other hand, there are some counter balances arguments on that consider views. Some people believe that children may engage any kind of paid work it’s totally unfair for their life. Furthermore, if they can work with study, they cannot more concentrate on study and they may be possibly to tempt for earning more money. Some children would distract from their path and attract from illegal activities like drugs, alcohol and so on.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion, on balance, there are an equal number of the arguments on both sides of children have paid work. I believe that this is the personal and family decision to their children may work or not.
whereas others are believe that
whereas others believe that
it’s very essential, valuable experience for their future career
it’s a very essential, valuable experience for their future career
there are several reasons for support to children can do paid work.
there are several reasons for supporting to children who can do paid work.
their parents could not affordable to provide
their parents could not afford to provide
if students would be work with study, they can financial support to their family.
if students would be working with study, they can financially support to their family.
arguments on that consider views.
arguments on that considering views.
they cannot more concentrate on study
they cannot concentrate more on study
there are an equal number of the arguments on both sides of children have paid work.
there are an equal number of the arguments on both sides of children who have paid work.
I believe that this is the personal and family decision to their children may work or not.
I believe that this is the personal and family decision to their children who may work or not.
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