Nowadays people are living longer and some believe that this can contribute to people’s development. What are the causes of this change? Is it a positive or negative phenomenon?
Due to advance medical facility and healthy food style, human can live life longer compare to past. Although it is not at all positive phenomena for societies,what are the some negative consequence which we are going to discuss in this essay further
Various reason can consider for living longer in today's time. First cause is medical science centre where scientist do research on new medicines for living longer life. In today era, we have almost every medicines facility for solution of diseases. Moreover new medical technological innovation help the patience to solve the disease. For example, in pathology , we have lots of medical equipment which we find what disease happens to the patient via blood test in few hours. compare to past, people become more careful of their food diet also. They prefer to eat more healthy and nutritious food than fatty or fast food. All recent change could be helped to the person live longer than ever before.
This development has create more negative than positive effect. On one hand, we can live longer and get bless from our loves one however, after certain age, it create burden in our home and society. For example, in current scenario, average an Australian person life age increase ninety plus. It create more problem for authorities because they have to spend huge amount of portion on age care nursing home, medicines and hospital facilities. If a elderly person stay with our family. One person should Have to allocate all the time to take care him or her. After certain age, taking care of older person is very big task.
In summarise, grey generation is a essential part of our society. However, after certain age, they become a burden of our society. In my opinion, advance medical facility create some kind of negative consequence in economic side which every government have to look out that.
human can live life longer compare to past.
human can live longer compared to the past.
Although it is not at all positive phenomena for societies
Although it is not at all a positive phenomena for societies
we have lots of medical equipment which we find what disease happens
we have lots of medical equipment to find what disease happens
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Sentence: This development has create more negative than positive effect.
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Sentence: On one hand, we can live longer and get bless from our loves one however, after certain age, it create burden in our home and society.
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