Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believe that international sport events, like the World Football Cup are necessary to reduce international fear or anger and express patriotic sentimental safely. Although it is beneficial for the world peace but the competition results can make some people unsatisfied. This essay will elaborate those two sides and give my personal opinion.
The world football cup is always missed by people around the world for some reasons—for the players, it allow them to earn much money; for the citizens, it becomes a great chance to support their countries or their favorite teams or players and also to get involve in euphoria of the World Football Cup season. Moreover, by gathering people who have various nationality to watch the competition in one country let them to meet many new foreigner friends. The other effect of this event is that it allow every countries to communicate and know each other.
In the other hand, not everyone can be supportive to accept defeat. It is not always the committees or players who complaint, but it is mostly the supporters. They bet some money on the competitions and when their supporting teams get lose, they against the result, moreover they may use anarchic ways; such as bullying, harassment and other kinds of violence. In some cases, it is hard to control because of their mass members.
In spite of some good effects, I personally disagree that the World Football Cup is the most essential way in reducing international tension or the safest manner to support our country. Other parts of events such as art and education are safer.
In conclusion, although the sport competitions, like World Football Cup are beneficial for some reasons, other kinds of events are more safe to support our country and to improve the world peace.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in some cases', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262996941896 0.247107548796 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.137614678899 0.15552993741 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100917431193 0.0946569551029 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0336391437309 0.0501201869031 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0642201834862 0.0437536398559 147% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103975535168 0.122223957237 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0122324159021 0.0403219363162 30% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.71307842843 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366972477064 0.0326786765898 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0978593272171 0.0861751148067 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0122324159021 0.0214082191602 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.0119246538136 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1791.0 1933.38276553 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.052104208 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98996655518 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20519365927 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338926174497 0.37474360046 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268456375839 0.284197041944 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191275167785 0.203843217982 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11744966443 0.137313986986 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71307842843 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.560935902166 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.147179111 60.7401812628 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0911823647 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9230769231 20.7725350517 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6163347867 49.5273876611 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8649517685 93.4120437189 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4565916399 15.2821509519 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.376205787781 0.594174754866 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01102204409 80% => OK
Readability: 49.768714507 49.1922392462 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.61038961039 1.69127372897 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.304645526215 0.332604825255 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0848712246561 0.102734651613 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0622723710701 0.0668474354756 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575251840184 0.534917948617 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1932203468 0.148666948902 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133661250138 0.13441755203 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818093382565 0.0742828286743 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369319041069 0.324241079732 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0429538330958 0.0640056729886 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225606240106 0.22793763319 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615397459959 0.0582452615562 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.493987976 95% => OK
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9