The reason why do you like shopping in modern market better than traditional market?

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The reason why do you like shopping in modern market better than traditional market?

In this modern era cannot be denied the development of more modern era, not only developing technology, in terms of marketing is very different from the old days. if the first marketing is only done with the meeting between the seller and buyer directly, or can be referred to as a traditional transaction, but for now it is not just the way it is done by the seller and the buyer, they can conduct transactions by means of online or through the means of communication and can be called also modern transactions. In terms of the building and how the sales market is also different from the modern buildings and traditional way of selling in the market. So, why do you like shopping in a modern market better than traditional market?

The first The characteristic of the modern market is the process of buying and selling through a bargain price, goods is generally supplied goods kitchen and household purposes, price is relatively cheaper, which is an open area and not air-conditioned. and the characteristics of the modern market is the price already stated, items are sold diverse and generally durable, Being in the building and the ministry conducted its own (self-service), Non Air conditioned and comfortable, place is clean, the location of the goods is of considerable concern to simplify the search goods, payment made by bringing the goods to the Cashier and no bargaining.

The second example of a modern market that are around us are hypermarkets, supermarkets, and mini markets, and examples of traditional market like a pare traditional market, tanah abang traditional market, and glodok traditional market.

According to yashinta agil purwanto (economist) visitor modern market more than traditional market, many people choose modern market because it is comfortable and clean. Than my opinion about it is, I more choose modern market because besides the place is comfortable and clean and I can relax with my friends or my family. So do not be shock if visitor modern market more than traditional.

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In this modern era cannot be denied
In this modern era it cannot be denied

in terms of marketing is very different from the old days
in terms of marketing it is very different from the old days

why do you like shopping in a modern market better than traditional market?
why do you think shopping in a modern market is better than than in a traditional market?

The first The characteristic
The first of The characteristic

I more choose modern market because
I choose modern market because more

So do not be shock if visitor modern market more than traditional.
So do not be shocked if people visit modern market more than traditional ones.

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