Should long-term job-seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?
A number of countries provide special benefits to the people who are jobless or have lost their jobs due to some reason. I believe it is a good practice and this actually helps provide in their tough times.
However, their is also a flip side to it. Some individuals take advantage of such policies and take these benefits for granted. To overcome this, job-seekers should be made to do some kind of community service so as to give something back to society and inturn to the government and country.
Doing community work will not only help ...
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Sentence: To overcome this, job-seekers should be made to do some kind of community service so as to give something back to society and inturn to the government and country.
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