Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In globalisation, people provide own self to compete with others people. First and foremost, and occupation is more important for people have. Many unemployments do crime for survive. On the one hand, criminal has fixed punishments for each type of crime. But, on the other hand, the judge has an important character give what correct prisoner. For that phenomenon have two edge.
For more pros side, people do not think hard what punishment correct to give crime. On the one hand, people will think do criminal because know what punishment will accept. The most important point is that verdict has been explicit for environmental. It make civilisation feel safety.
For more cross, criminal has reason why someone kills others, steals, or makes disturbance. People have multifarious reasons such as revenge, need money for buy food or survive, self actualisation or etc. Therefore, people can not able fixed punishments for criminal. Perhaps, people whom do crime need illumination or treatment with psychologist.
In my opinion, law department has to make standard disturbance about various crime along with that prisoners. For example, rule number 1 paragraph 1 about kill someone that punishment is jail. But, if someone kills because protect own self it can be not a big mistake. It is mean that someone has not into jail. Nevertheless, someone has fine and must pay to government.
To sum up, that important give information about crime is not good behaviour with others reasons while is for protect self. Hence, government and civilisation have to protect environmental without crime and live with peaceful together.
First and foremost, and occupation is more important for people have
First and foremost, occupation is more important for people to have
Sentence: In globalisation, people provide own self to compete with others people.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and people
Many unemployments do crime for survive
Many unemployment people do crime to survive
the judge has an important character give what correct prisoner. For that phenomenon have two edge.
the judge has an important character to give what correct prisoner. For that phenomenon, it has two edges.
because know what punishment will accept
because they know what punishment will accept
It make civilisation feel safety.
It make civilizations feel safe.
people can not able fixed punishments for criminal
people can not fix punishments for criminals
It is mean that
It means that
Sentence: To sum up, that important give information about crime is not good behaviour with others reasons while is for protect self.
Description: The word give is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to give
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and reasons
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and protect
Sentence: In globalisation, people provide own self to compete with others people.
Error: globalisation Suggestion: globalization
Sentence: It make civilisation feel safety.
Error: civilisation Suggestion: civilization
Sentence: People have multifarious reasons such as revenge, need money for buy food or survive, self actualisation or etc. Therefore, people can not able fixed punishments for criminal.
Error: actualisation Suggestion: actualization
Sentence: Hence, government and civilisation have to protect environmental without crime and live with peaceful together.
Error: civilisation Suggestion: civilization
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