Some people consider thinking about future and plaining for the future to be a waste of time . They argue that people should simply live in the moment . Do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that everyone thinks about the future and planing .It is the part of our notion . Every man becomes a goal in life . He wants to achive it . It is human behavior. An argument has been put forward that some people plan about future to a waste of time. Some people argue that pepole should live in the moment . According to me, it is a debatable issue .
There are a plethora of resons why some people think planing of future to be a waste of time . First and foremost point is that some people do work hard for future and they miss the present important time . They donot spend time with ownself and family. It is a bad think . Because time once passed can never be recalled. Secondly , some folks are runing for earning money to bright future and they donot have time for enjoying life . Thirdly , many people take burden on mind from future planing . Someone beautiful said some people are panic from thinking about future.
On the other hand, so many men , so many minds. Some other people argue that everyone should live in present simply . Everyman can enjoy the present time and enjoy the every minutes of the life . Someone also people beautiful said donot worry about future because future are not fix . People should spent time with family and friends.
In conclusion , after ponder over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with my self. I come to this conclusion that people should plan about future because if the donot think about future . They will not do any work at present for future. I also say people should not spend a lot of time on future . They should live simply with a aim
Sentence: It is a bad think .
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Sentence: Someone beautiful said some people are panic from thinking about future.
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Sentence: Someone also people beautiful said donot worry about future because future are not fix .
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Sentence: People should spent time with family and friends.
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if the donot think about future .
if they donot think about future .
They should live simply with a aim
They should live simply with an aim
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Sentence: Some people argue that pepole should live in the moment .
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Sentence: They donot spend time with ownself and family.
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Sentence: Secondly , some folks are runing for earning money to bright future and they donot have time for enjoying life .
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Sentence: Someone also people beautiful said donot worry about future because future are not fix .
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Sentence: I come to this conclusion that people should plan about future because if the donot think about future .
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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