Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
No one can ever deny the significance of parents' upbringing as one of the most important method for preparing children for society treatment. However, the schools play the most important rule too. In my opinion, both of these are inevitable.
On the one hand, children spend their childhood, before going to school, at home. Consequently, parents play the most important rule at this age. In childhood, the range of the age between 4 and 7, the treatment methods are created by the parents; therefore, if parents learn mistreatment to their kids, it is so difficult to change their mood later. For example, some rudeness of children at school can be resulted of parents' defaults at home.
On the other hand, after children go to school, they spend more time at school. In this situation, children's treatment can be brought about teachers, students, friends, and even management of their schools. In my belief, the format of treatment shape at this range of age. Indeed, schools should teach students how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
As a result, due to the fact that children are the next generation of community, both schools and parents must try to teach them the necessaries of upbringing.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269387755102 0.247107548796 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.10612244898 0.15552993741 68% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0408163265306 0.0946569551029 43% => More adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0489795918367 0.0501201869031 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408163265306 0.0437536398559 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151020408163 0.122223957237 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0244897959184 0.0403219363162 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75035910228 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0367346938776 0.0326786765898 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.10612244898 0.0861751148067 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.0214082191602 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00816326530612 0.0119246538136 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1256.0 1933.38276553 65% => OK
No of words: 211.0 316.052104208 67% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92452830189 6.10592293882 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20519365927 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331753554502 0.37474360046 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298578199052 0.284197041944 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208530805687 0.203843217982 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137440758294 0.137313986986 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75035910228 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.560935902166 101% => OK
Word variations: 52.6404650863 60.7401812628 87% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5833333333 20.7725350517 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6440421347 49.5273876611 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5874439462 93.4120437189 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3542600897 15.2821509519 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538116591928 0.594174754866 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01102204409 0% => OK
Readability: 47.4411532385 49.1922392462 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.27083333333 1.69127372897 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.351758222858 0.332604825255 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110862442093 0.102734651613 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.093069399108 0.0668474354756 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564334054341 0.534917948617 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178624635213 0.148666948902 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14469225188 0.13441755203 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627893465908 0.0742828286743 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376681280127 0.324241079732 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0397171684946 0.0640056729886 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238331101261 0.22793763319 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420699401428 0.0582452615562 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41883767535 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.88977955912 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.60220440882 115% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.493987976 95% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9