Today prison is the most common solution for crime. But some people think that it would be a more effective way to provide them with better education to prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Imprisonment, the loss of freedom, is considered as a general accepted punishment for those who commit a crime. However, it is notable that the criminal rate is still high, despite the fact that the number of jails is growing. In my view, education for offenders should be applied into the punishment to build a more harmonious society.
Educating criminals can decrease the crime rate. One’s personal moral value is the key factor to control their behaviors. As a result, the most important thing is to teach offenders what is wrong from right, and to correct their wrong perspective to the lif...
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Sentence: Therefore, it should combines imprisonment with education to help offenders to become useful people for the society.
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