we are seeing a significant increase inonline shopping today.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give your own opinion and relevant examples
online shopping or E-commerce shopping is fastest way for indoor shopping and on of the fastest industries growing in the world. After the introduction of it and www world has witness of revolutionary change in almost all area has cover this business of online shopping. it is very easiest way for purchase goods online. earlier it is only possible by going to the concerned shop phiscally .but now things are very change people can buy items from home just by using gadget which has access to the internet and items will delivered to doorstep withing short of time same we can gift something or our family members just adding their address and local pincode order will get delivered to them in short of time.
on other hand I can see people are very busy with their schedules,job,classes,colleges and they wont get enough time to visit physically to concerned shops. furthermore when you are purchasing online people no need to go each and every shops to buy different goods. Thet get all items under one roof whether it clothings, electronic or stationary the list is never ending.
on other hand their is some disadvantages of online shopping as well. First of all buyer can not esurerity of products what he is going to order. sometime customer get totlly different items as compare to actual order. moreover when individuals do online payment transactions purchase over this website their are putting their financial credencial at risk because of lots of security need to get measure. but sometime some items need to be tested like footwear just to get correct size
in my opinion this is definitely a positive trend . just like everyone has a draw back but advantages are clearly up to mark and overweighting the disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84013605442 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86513499951 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 294.0 20.2975951904 1448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1423.0 106.682146367 1334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 294.0 20.7667163134 1416% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 86.0 7.06120827912 1218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123285656649 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123285656649 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881831039603 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474935398684 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 148.4 13.0946893788 1133% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -226.93 50.2224549098 -452% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 118.0 11.3001002004 1044% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.17 8.58950901804 246% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 119.6 10.1190380762 1182% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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