(08/11/2014) Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People often hold different views about predicators resulting in crime. In my opinion, both nature and extrinsic elements as social issues and poverty are attributed to crime.
There are several reasons as to why people argue that crime is a product of nature. It is mostly the case when people used to be more aggressive and impulsive than their peers, and these seemingly innate characteristics would exacerbate when they become a fully-grown up. Acting violently at an early age can somehow foretell their tendency of criminality in the later years. Furthermore, individuals who possess bad characteristics such as laziness or greedy are likely to offend because it is the easiest way of getting money without efforts. When those find that they are unable to afford necessities, or luxuries that they can see others enjoying, they are more likely to be tempted to steal.
It is understandable why numerous individuals violate laws out of poverty. People who live below the poverty line are short on money and lack the basic necessities of life. Therefore, resorting to crime such as robbery is the last option that allows them to support themselves and their families. In addition, social issue such as drug abuse is blamed on criminal acts. Since excessive use of drugs could lead to behavioral problems. Moreover, if a person addicted to drugs, he is unable to support his addiction, followed by the fact that he might end up in a life of crime to fuel his habits.
In conclusion, it seems to me that unlawful actions are originated from not only human nature but also social factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97378277154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7696572236 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9096939812 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181419947036 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599114847335 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673723850956 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114636790473 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096704560267 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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