7. Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a great concern about the situation that people tend to read news on the Internet. But someone think that newspapers may still the most significant source of news. From my own perspective, I completely disagree with this opinion.
On the one hand, during the booming of technologies, people do not have enough time to read news on the newspaper at the moment, they have a trend that reading news on the internet. The simple reason that there are several benefits of reading news on the internet. Firstly, news on the internet is up-to-minute. It updates at a really time. As long a...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... read news on the Internet. But someone think that newspapers may still the most sign...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s on the internet. For example, you used to buy a newspaper, but if you have a sm...
^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ews and you do not pay for a newspaper. While reading news on the internet is a way t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...he environment. We can save paper which use to print newspaper. It exactly saves fo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6744966443 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63977102482 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479865771812 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4612343673 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9411764706 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434907848961 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143314073943 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106582096672 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296348379699 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591564388818 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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