Nowadays with the improvement in transport allow people to travel more easily, they can get to the destination directly in a short time. That thing has changed many people's holiday experience.
In the past, tourist found the countryside where they want to visit on their own. They studied and discovered not only new things such as foods, people, clothes...but also the culture in this nation. When they got back home, there were many colourful stories that they could tell.
Today, a lot of travel companies sell "VIP" package for the businessman. That means they are transported from the airport to the resort, where they stay for the rest of their holiday and all their's need are satisfied. Sometimes they go to new places to reduce street and have time to relax their mind.
Another problem is the language barrier, especially in high season tourism. It is very hard to find a great tour guild going with them to memorable places or impressive heritage. Because people scare they can be lost and something bad can happen like the robber or kidnap that the reason why they usually lock them up in the resort.
This is very different from the past when the crime not highly and danger, hotel facilities were basic and tourist easy to look for places to eat and beautiful beaches by themselves. In my opinion, this is bad for everyone, because if you go to new places you should go out and find out special thing in that region instead of staying in the resort
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77431906615 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45638420724 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6890195881 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199509873701 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671403944067 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348905292639 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105309214091 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258749021636 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.