Advertising is all around us it is an unavoidable part of everyone s life Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In modern times, advertisements are becoming more and more an inevitable part of our lifestyles. While many believe that they have a detrimental impact on people's lives, others advocate that advertisements tend to be advantageous. This essay will discuss both views and explain why I support the latter point of view.
Opponents of advertisements claim that they aim to manipulate individuals. Indeed, it is undeniable that there are some types of advertisements that try to persuade people that buying a product will make them happier. Take the internet pop-ups as an example; these advertisements impact viewers with alluring marketing, often encouraged by celebrities, making people believe that they will become as delighted as celebrities seem, if they purchase the displayed items. When advertisements set people's sights on each product by displaying it 24/7 in someone's Facebook front page, they become annoying and intrusive. Clearly, there is some merit in "manipulative" argument.
However, supporters of advertisements as an inescapable part of our lives, myself included, feel that advertising has two main advantages. First of all, advertising tell customers about the elements of each product, showing the negative impact yet. Smoking companies, for instance, have put warnings on cigarette packs about the risk of smoking on people's health. Another argument that makes advertising a beneficial aspect of our lives is that informs us about the choices we have. Without advertising we would have less choice, if companies, for example, decided not to display any of their products, and customers had to be informed by in person conferences, visiting each brand.
In conclusion, although there are many who state that advertising has a negative impact on our lifestyle by manipulating people, I am if the belief that advertisements are a crucial part of our lives, because customers are efficiently informed and explore all the choices they have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'a more inevitable'?
Suggestion: a more inevitable
...s, advertisements are becoming more and more an inevitable part of our lifestyles. While many beli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50657894737 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26749896943 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585526315789 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.31151638 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285820668133 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101928571168 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055092626825 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18579660021 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432742611632 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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