Age discrimination occurs when a decisionis made on the basis of a person's age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
This essay will compare discrimination against older workers, the power of younger workers in a company and how the decisions should be made in the workplace.
According to the research, in the workplace older workers have more experience and knowledge about any issue in the company. Senior employees can work under pressure because they habituated to deal with the situations and they can easily guide their team members to work fast and in efficient manner to complete the given task however decision must be made under the guidance of whole team is better to solve issues that may arise in future.
Anyway, on the other hand new employees come up with innovative ideas on a given task, they gain more knowledge about given topic before discussion and they try to solve the task in an efficient way but they couldn't take any decision because they're juniors in the company and new workers will have more energy than old workers so they can work more hours for the growth of the company.
Instead of discrimination against older workers be made illegal personally i can say that if new and old workers work together for example if old workers guide the new workers then they can achieve the given task as early as possible however it will also help the company growth.
This essay compared about discrimination against old workers and new workers in work place and it is clear that work coordination should be their which will solve the problems easily.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238805970149 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.152985074627 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108208955224 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485074626866 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.044776119403 0.0437548338989 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138059701493 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0335820895522 0.0403226058552 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53418547072 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0223880597015 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00373134328358 0.00163938923432 228% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932835820896 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0485074626866 0.021408717616 227% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0111940298507 0.011925033212 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1482.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.928 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14 0.203846283523 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.092 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53418547072 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.037074148 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.1846690104 60.7387585426 76% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 41.6666666667 20.7743622355 201% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0267613163 49.517814964 194% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.0 127.492653851 194% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6666666667 20.7743622355 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.814263465372 205% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 68.4666666667 49.1944974215 139% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280174490035 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.299513408184 0.102741220458 292% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0535647579612 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.917041719135 0.534860350844 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139830104306 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203450107134 0.134430193775 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824956721481 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376405033159 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.052386880204 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207016636697 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779707302544 0.058150111329 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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