Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there is a phenomenon that governments impose heavy taxes on airline industry in order to stop its detrimental effects on the environment. While there is a strong case for this, others disapprove. From my perspective, I totally support the latter view as this policy would exert the following drawbacks.
There is no denying that increasing tax on airline industry would be an ineffecient strategy to reduce its environmental impacts. Take car industry as an example. Despite higher tax rates, there are now even a growing number of travelling cars, worsening the air quality. Another negative aspect of this policy would be that this type of tax may exert social inequality among citizens from different financial backgrounds. This tax will equally apply to all of us, leaving a considerable financial burden on the middle class while the rich would remain unaffected.
Even worse, the higher airline tax will lead to the fact that tourism industry would be seriously weakened. As a result of more costly airtickets, a significant drop in the number of passengers will be witnessed. To illustrate, Austria used to be one of the world’s favourite destinations for spring vacations. However, since an increasing aviation tax policy was passed, this country has experienced negative influences on its tourism turnover, slowing down economic development of the whole country.
In conclusion, although it might be true that raising tax on aviation industry can be an effective solution to alleviate environmental degradation, I am more inclined to the view that the governments should not tax air industry more heavily to prevent some inevitable disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38490566038 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04438274317 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3405575905 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115001460054 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431053079896 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254101509528 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753901690881 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134811605192 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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