All children should study a foreign language in school starting in the earliest grades To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples

Essay topics:

All children should study a foreign language in school starting in the earliest grades.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

As we all all know, foreign languages are one of the important part of everyone's life. Some people assume that all children should study a foreign language in the school at the beginning grades. Though this is a wonderful thought, there are opinion of the other way too. So we shall discuss both the views in detail.

There are people who hold strong belief that the foreign languages are not important to be added in school curriculum. Those people are mostly elderly or are either those who don't travel to foreign countries. For example, an elderly man staying at home, living a peaceful retirement life, wouldn't find foreign language as important. And similarly a person who is labourer in some construction field leading his life with daily wages may not find foreign languages as a part of the life. So they might have a concept that foreign language isn't a vital subject to be added in school curriculum.

However, there are the other people who are stringent to begin foreign language in the schools from the low grade classes. These people have a notion that learning foreign language can bring a new culture, knowledge and various opportunities. For example, a young doctor who wish to aspire his post graduation from a foreign country would be much benefited to cope up the foreign culture and to communicate. Anyone would be much confident to move to any of the foreign countries, if the individual is familiar with the particular language. And finally it can bring up a new generation with confidence that would in turn even open opportunities in governing our country.

In my opinion, I would consider that its very important to add a foreign language in the schools starting from lower grades but the best language choosen must be an international language or a language that's mostly spoken in the world. This could definitely change the very face of a country itself.

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Average: 8.9 (3 votes)

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'for example', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221264367816 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.149425287356 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117816091954 0.0946595960268 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373563218391 0.0501214627716 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0316091954023 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109195402299 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64903737612 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287356321839 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.00163938923432 351% => OK
Determiners: 0.135057471264 0.0861772015684 157% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0344827586207 0.021408717616 161% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201149425287 0.011925033212 169% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1888.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86335403727 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363354037267 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27950310559 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17701863354 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10248447205 0.137316102897 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64903737612 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 55.0407650394 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.125 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0726131086 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 48.075310559 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.67105263158 1.69124875643 99% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362427327127 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104436845493 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701899744213 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517016707841 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132710822139 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141739102277 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870589391877 0.0742795772207 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357466330015 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0229587607241 0.0638462369009 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255250954511 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353788039168 0.058150111329 61% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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