although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree
It is true that the majority of people read news on the Internet. Although newspapers also exist simultaneously with media newspapers, it can’t be seen as the primary source of news nowadays.
There are two main reasons why reading news on the internet is more likely to benefit community than traditional one. Firstly, The ability to upgrade the information on the Internet is astonishingly up-to-the-minute coincide with a vast range of subjects and fields which will bring an enormous knowledge to individuals who would like to absorb the knowledge of the world. Secondly, information seekers are conveniently accessible to media newspapers simply through their handsets which have been ubiquitous in recent years. You can, therefore, be able to collect the information on the way you commute to a workplace or home without effort to hold bulky newspapers.
In addition, deforestation comes at the expense of traditional newspapers. As the result, the paper used to print newspapers is stemmed from the destruction of forest and paper companies have been exploiting excessively trees to produce paper. This action has caused partially global warming for decades. Consequently, reading news on the Internet will be able to mitigate deforestation resulted in changing environment detrimentally.
In conclusion, the change in reading media newspapers instead of a traditional counterpart is inevitable in the technological era. This phenomenon benefits not only for society but also for the sustainable planet.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55603448276 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25224871898 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4999325782 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248032643289 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877385776943 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935637259648 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144724054089 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870495154761 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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