Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will reman the most impotant source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that the traditional press has kept the most necessary sourse of news, but I think newspaper is not the majority knowledge of news. Nowadays, the large of population search and use informations of news on the internet everyday, so i completely disagree with that view.
On the one hand, there are some reasons to explain for the inhabitant who use internet to reach much useful datas. Firstly, the internet show that the priority in immense storage capacity of vital sourse of information is enormous. For example,if you need to define a data in primary school or university, you just need to open internet to obtain it immediately; however, you may visualise that your house must be contained how much spaces to save a huge book during that time. Secondaly, with the internet age, it is able to draw inspiration and easily access for many people who have demand to read significant information anywhere and anytime such as: underground or bus with connected equipment. Finally, there has been an explosion in the use of platform like Facebook and Twitter where a lot of valuable opinion and information might be interacted together; this is not only enlarge their knowledge but also develop their soft skill after considering news on the internet.
On the other hand, it is clear that athough the internet has rapid growth but the newspapers still have important position of news in generations. It would not be difficult to recognize there are many people prefer keeping their eyes on the line of book to using screen of smart phones or computers. In addition, people who may be not likely to access internet or smater equipment would use traditional newspapers to achieve reports. For example, when we was in primary school in village, we did have hard finance to invest all money in computer having internet connection, therefore we had to go to local postoffice to buy newspaper for children and drawed lots to bing them come back home. Beside, the internet may not be a reliable resource for knowledge since there is often conflicting information where taken from different source, while the traditional press may be believed exactly because of their professional journalists and editor.
In conclusion, both traditional press and source of news on internet have equal importance in considering anything, therefore people may choose resource which they prefer entirely to read.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...se informations of news on the internet everyday, so i completely disagree with that vie...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
... of information is enormous. For example,if you need to define a data in primary sc...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e that your house must be contained how much spaces to save a huge book during that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07808564232 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75821285197 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561712846348 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7580768696 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.076923077 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5384615385 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205449946797 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824600718743 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600701151353 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157167765472 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585043156654 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.