The amount of sport shown on T.V every week has increased significantly and this is having impact on live sports events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?
It is true that since the beginning of the last century, the numbers of sport events which are being broadcasted have risen dramatically, and it is expected to increase even more. Some claim that this have negative consequences regarding live events. However, in my view, the advantages gained from compelling sport matches on T.V are far more than disadvantages.
To start with the benefits, firstly, T.V coverage enable millions of peoples throughout the world to attend international events without the need for far- distance traveling with it is all expensive costs of visas, aero plane tickets, hostels reservation, entrance tickets and costs of living . Secondly, greater more number of people can watch the event , and thus the team can may gain global support from overseas fans. Thirdly, watching matches for international strong teams of certain sport would positively affect the local teams in the countries where these sport teams are less developed.
Regarding drawbacks, one of disadvantages is that , fewer people nowadays attend live matches , and thence less financial return to the sponsor clubs. This certainly would affect negatively the budget allocated for players training and salaries. Moreover, as the numbers of fan decrease ,the psychological support given through their cheering and chanting would also lessen. In addition to that , the economic growth experienced by the hosting countries during the periods of international events , would become insignificant.
To sum up, broadcasting of sport on T.V undoubtedly have it is impact on live sport events . Nevertheless, in my opinion it has far more pros than cons , especially for individuals and for sport development.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50763358779 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94457488647 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7650702103 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261928756393 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101895528052 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983466486076 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183160465686 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122067176985 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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