Around the world children learn English as a second language at school However in some places they also learn at kindergarten pre school care when children are aged two to five Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten P

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Around the world, children learn English as a second language at school. However, in some places, they also learn at kindergarten (pre-school care, when children are aged two to five).

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning English at kindergarten.

Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

English is a major language being used worldwide. Because of this, most of the children learn this language at school. While ,in some countries, kids are compelled to start learning English from kindergarten. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the merits and demerits of learning English from a very young age.
There are plethora of advantages to learn English since childhood. Firstly, if toddler learn English he becomes familiar with the words and he does not face too much trouble in making sentences . Also, he does not face any language difficulty in young age. As there are lots of competition in the world so learning from childhood really helps the child to compete with the world. It also increases the confidence of child .
However, there are some drawbacks too. Learning language from a small age can overburden child . In the preschool, child has lot of things to learn, so providing extra language to learn is not healthy for his mental health . As a result, child become unable to learn his native languages, consequently cannot speak properly and creates a sense of shame when others make fun of him. Furthermore, It creates a lot of confusion in his mind and somehow affect his intellectual ability.
To conclude, learning second language at preschool has both pros such as early familiarization with the language , boostup the confidencelevel when taking to international students and cons like low performance in class due to overburden of extra language.

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, while, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11522633745 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8757181386 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4694710829 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369400724927 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120575112239 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763202653045 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215201724098 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945811141784 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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